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She is an angel, beauty undefined,
Awe-inspiring, unlike any other.
Perfectly gorgeous, a gift to mankind,
In turn they swoon, one after another.

But an angel without wings is broken;
Hers were taken a hundred years ago.
The curse she bears is silent, unspoken,
But still she smiles, her beauty aglow.

What she wouldn't give for another chance,
But she knows she must live with her choices.
She stands unblinkingly, fixed in her stance,
Never once giving in to those voices.

Silently, she waits, for that fateful day,
When a mortal shall arrive in her life.
His feelings of lust shall be kept at bay;
Then, only then, shall she become his wife.
It's poetry times bitches :D

You can interpret this however you like :)

This is the first poem I've written since..... I started grade nine? Something like that. Anyways, hope you guys like :D
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So a renegade angel finds love? Idk. Interesting poem nonetheless. Keep on writing
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carla456 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No one said poetry had to make perfect sense.
Thanks.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I never said It didn't make sense. Just pointing out what I thought of it. Oh, and I know well enough. Been writing for 2 years now
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carla456 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cool. I've been writing pretty much my entire life.
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AlfredoLover Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
In a way, we all can say that. I've just kept track of how long I've been doing it without it having to be some English homework or something. XD
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finishyourtea Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student Writer
This is great! Keep writing!
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carla456 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
I have some other poems posted if you're interested :)
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
Beautiful and sorrowful. I just love the first line. Wonderful job.
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carla456 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much :D
My fave line is probably... "Hers were taken a hundred years ago." :)
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
You're welcome. :)
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